So the lyric came from a B rated movie. I don’t remember the name of the film. But at the end the guy says “I ย understand the basic weaknesses that make you do the things you do”. The verse practically wrote itself.
Another dark lyric. I remember in New York taking this song to an ASCAP round table. After playing it many songwriters shot it down because of the negative hook. I was defended by a pro that night; a man who wrote hits for the Supremes. He felt any emotion was worthy, even negative ones.
Later on in the band Darling II in Boston we did this. ย It has more of a ska feeling and some great sax work by Tom Gimble.